Version 0.85 (Haruki) - Public Release


Good evening,

I've been a little ill today and spent most of my time in bed, so I'm posting this a bit later than I'd like. I won't prattle on too much about it. This update was a bit contentious with patrons. I softened up a single line in it that most people seemed to agree was too harsh, but otherwise kept it as is. I will add a bit of a warning in that the update contains an adult scene and the theme of it might be a bit rough for other people's tastes, so keep in mind before you proceed. Otherwise I hope you guys enjoy.

Important disclaimer: In case there is an issue that causes older player saves to stop working, there really is nothing that can be done about that. Sometimes, changes are made to the code that makes some/all old saves stop working and I can't avoid making them at times. If that happens, use the 'Skip to Next Choice' function (alongside Skip Unread if needed) to get to the point where you stopped.

Changelog:

  • New in-game day for Haruki
  • New art

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See you all again for the next update!

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I guarentee I'm going to get flack for this but

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That was toxic. As. Fuck. There is nothing healthy or okay about how Haruki treated Yuuchi. It was sexual coercion, sexual abuse, and so many other horrible things that have really made me reevaluate this vn as a whole. I'm aware the Shoichi route was similar and eventually addressed that toxicity but I am VERY worried that, given the fact WOTB claims this is a short route, that won't be handled here. And to those of you defending this, a sentient being has innate value that makes using them the way Haruki used Yuuchi wrong.

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Your first time reading adult content?

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If you think adult content makes sexual coercion and similar things ok you need therapy

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I think we read entirely different FVN's if you truly thing there was any sexual coercion or anything of that sort of thing.

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If you are going to complain, perhaps you should just stop reading it (same goes for video content). If this kind of content is not for you, you should stay away from it. No offense intended. Yes, this type of content was disturbing for me at first, but after a while I have grown used to it. It is nothing new for me anymore. Still you are entitled to your opinion and I respect it. But you cannot persuade me to think otherwise. You have your opinion and I have mine. Again, no offense intended.

Looking forward to how things will Go between Yuuchi and Haruki. Keep up the good work developers 😉👍

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Loved it! Can't wait for more, I'm so happy you made him a route, it was perfect! He thinks he's so sneaky, getting Yuuichi all those stuff saying that he had a discount or didn't have change so he got two popsicles, it's so cute. He shows that he likes Yuuichi in his own way. There's a chance it's all a coincidence but hey, one can dream hehe.

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One of my fav updates so far and also made Haruki my favorite character

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Figured id leave my peace. Honestly people forget so much about his route to complain this bad. Like honestly have you read it? At all? "Oh it just went 0 to 100" no it did not. Your oblivious. Haruki has been slowly and i mean slowly coming to trust yuu and has been showing intrest and attraction. Hes done things out of his way for yuu. Sure he acts like hes not doing it for yuu but if you actually read he is. The sexual tension between the 2 has been building forever so lets be honest its not a surprise. The only surprise is yuu hasnt jumped him sooner. The entire route has been building up to this turning point. This is one of the major points. But it was built up to and by no means is a surprise if youve even bothered to pay attention to how their relationship has been unfolding. And regarding "the rest of the story has been pushed to the back ground". YES Haruki is not part of the group and he doesnt get along with them. He doesn't get along with almost anyone. If he did hang out with them it'd ruin his whole character. He trust yuu. Not the others. He liked yuu not them. You cant have the story with them in it because yuu wants every second with haruki. Now "this isn't yuu. He's not like that" THE WHOLE POINT OF HARUKIS ROUTE IS HOW DRASTICALLY DIFFERENT YUU IS WHEN HE SEES A HARSHER SIDE. Yuu stops caring as much. What he did at the school. Yeah hes pent up. Horny. And you know what he doesn't care anymore because people have been misjudging haruki so he doesnt care what people think anymore because its been misguided and flat out wrong. His character has changed from all the other routes. 

Sorry for the rant but im annoyed at all these people complaining for stuff they didnt pay attention too when the route has taken the time to develop this but when it shows up people wanna act like none of that happened and its the same yuu from the other routes. 

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That's not the complaint. The complaint is Haruki used Yuuchi in an inherently wrong way. It was disturbing, and straight up unhealthy. The fact you don't think so makes you a deplorable person. Sit down and shut up

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It's a bit concerning to see some people don't see the issue with the current route update, and dismiss the critiques I've seen here. 


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The scene itself, it's hot, it really is, even I can admit that. The thing is, it feels like Yuu's character got assassinated somewhat, and didn't stay consistent with whom he really is. Amongst the other routes, Yuu has always been the conservative type when it comes to showing his sexuality, he may oogle, he may peak, he may glance to check someone out, but he would never do something so brazenly as give someone oral in public, in their school of all places.

Yes, he may be dense and slow at times, impulsive at worst, as seen in Shoichi's route where he kissed him infront of his house without taking into consideration if his dad was even there. But this way far beyond that. He did something so risky, borderline expulsion worthy, in a school, where his entire career, his future, his reputation, not just among students, but his friends, hangs in the balance. Which we have seen, he really deeply cares about, he wants to go pro, he cares alot of his friends, and especially his family, and certainly wouldn't want his sexuality to be outed, worse, with an act like that. And, going back to Shoichi's Route, it's been established that he doesn't like to be pushed to do something he doesn't want. And that was in private with him. What more in public, in school, just barely out of sight from the rest. (Yes he did mention this would've been something that we would've been disgusted by, something he would've hated, something he wouldn't let happen to himself, and yet he still went with it. It feels so, disingenuous. Especially after building up what kind of person Yuu is)

Honestly, throughout the entire route, I've felt as if everything else in the story got a backseat. His family, his friends, his passion for tennis, his mental problems. Everything was pushed aside, so that the focus would be entirely over him gushing and being obsessed by Haruki. (Which, I don't take issue as much, I do find it cute, just as long as everything else in the story didn't also get shafted for it. Because everything seems to happen "behind the scenes" and just delivered to us through exposition and dialogue. It would be nice if we get to see the other stuff we see from the other routes as well, but this time with we get a few unique interactions because it's in Haruki's route.

All in all, I still like the route (maybe a bit less now, but still leaning towards like at least), but I do hope they do make it like in Shoichi's route, where he slowly realizes that it's not something he actually wanted, and has a talk with Haruki about it. Or at the very least, have him ask for his consent first before he does it, or let him lead like in Shoichi's. Because yes, Haruki is different from the other characters, but as it stands, the relationship looks very toxic, because if everything went horribly wrong, Yuu is the one who stands to lose the most from it.


TLDR: Yuu's Character feels assassinated throughout this entire route, I like the route still, but I hope they would keep some aspects of Yuu's personality and important character key points intact throughout the route, and also make it so that there's a revelation in a later update where he realizes its something he didn't like/let him take it at his pace and have a talk with Haruki. 

PS. The Roughness of the scene doesn't need to be lessened or cut out entirely, like I said, it was hot, and I understand why the route took that direction. But at the very least, give Yuu back his character and personality, the one we've come to love. And give the route it's key moments for Yuu's development and not just make it about him being with Haruki

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Hmm, I dunno. I'm kind of on the fence, but as is, I don't think it bothers me that much. Sure, it was definitely a shocker, and I definitely wanna see how it's treated afterwards, cause, yeah, it needs to be adressed...
But, it kinda makes sense ? I don't think it's that out of character for Haruki, and as for Yuuichi... yeah, sure, he's been weird. I think it's got two causes : 
first, this route came in late. Gotta catch up. So all the 'common' stuff gets squeezed, cause, well, we already read it. Hence all the ellypsis, too. And Haruki's not in their group, so it'd be hard to fit him in. I'm guessing (hoping ?) this'll change later
second, I think the angle of this route is different, too-- it's far more physical. It started as a kiss, grew as attraction, and, after Yuu's realization, has been building up and penting up for some time--especially with all the teasing. While it's not as 'romantic' as the other routes from the get-go, I still think it's a valid angle to explore, an interesting one to read, and quite plausible--especially at this age. We already know he was quite sexually active with his previous girlfriends. The guy got urges.  *and* he's a prude. People are full of contradictions.
not saying everything's fine as is, I get why people are shocked, and I'm curious to see how we're gonna evolve after that (I doubt they'll stay at the 'fuck bully' stage), but... Idk. I'm ok with it.It happens. I'll see where it goes.

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I really didn't like it, especially after the previous great updates with him, even though I usually enjoy slutty stuff and hot scenes — but here it felt completely out of place. On top of that, it was written crudely, with no quality. The romantic dynamics felt forced, and the characters acted out of line with their original personalities. It honestly feels like it was written by an AI.

I really didn't want this wolf's route to die for me too, because I love this visual novel — but if it keeps going in this direction, that's exactly what's going to happen.

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My previous comment never sent so I am rewriting. I adore this visual novel and its characters, and Haruki has been my favorite route, but I have a major problem with this update, and it's not Haruki or the rough scene, it's Yuu.

 I think it makes perfect sense for Haruki's character that he would act this way, and I liked how the scene itself was written and played out, but afterwards Yuu genuinely felt like a completely different character... I have a feeling he'll be less okay with what transpired over time but even then, he has a full afternoon to mull over what happened and he doesn't have ANY concerns or even thoughts worth showing us except that his mood is better and he liked it and he likes haruki? He doesn't have any thoughts about the fact that Haruki's gay? that Haruki now knows HE'S gay? doesn't wonder what their relationship is now? 

And on top of that, this chronically awkward guy who gets in his head about everything is just able to have a normal casual conversation with Haruki after forcefully losing his gay virginity like it's nothing? Time and time again, in every route including this one, we are shown that yuuichi is NOT good at acting casual and collected when it comes to gay stuff, but suddenly he can handle talking to someone who he gave a risky public rough blowjob to, who he didn't even know was gay or into him until approximately 15 seconds before choking on his dick? He couldn't even handle seeing it flaccid in the locker room without mentally shutting down last update! Then to go from that back to yuiichis puppy love "I think I'm falling for him" was also quite the tonal whiplash for me. 

This is maybe the second craziest thing to happen to Yuu in the whole visual novel, only behind (life changing thing that happens in juns route), and I am sure it will be explored further but the fact that almost nothing about this gets examined by yuuichi or given any narrative weight at all in this update is quite jarring, and feels very out of character for him. I think many people, myself included, would have no problem with the suddenness and intensity of the scene if it wasn't handled so casually after, but as it stands I understand why some people felt burned by this update. I really do hope this one gets a rewrite, not to remove the sex scene or even soften it, but to make yuuichis reaction the following afternoon align with what we've seen of him as a character so far, or at least hint that things aren't as peachy as they come off this chapter. Regardless, I hope you are able to feel better soon, your health is important to me above anything mentioned here. It's been a delight reading this world you've built and I am thankful you're sharing it with us.

The last scene with Haruki coming to see him off just made me self-destruct lol. I'm about to get diabetes with the amount of sweetness from that scene. >.<

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Okay I was compelled to make a comment since I've heard of the backlash to this update and I just have to say. I think most people complaining are just full of shit. (yes I'm exaggerating, yes your opinion to the art piece is valid, I'm just venting)

Haruki ISN'T like the other characters, SPECIALLY not like the other route characters. He's way more down to earth, he's a grown ass gay man that isn't afraid of using slurs because he knows he can use them. And most of all he NNNNNEEVER gave people any tells of him being a lovey dovey bleeding heart who'd fold at any genuine sign of affection.

Haruki. is. rauchy. Every single time he's caught Yuuichi oggling at his body, and this was multiple times, all he had to give in return was tease him with the most SHIT EATING GRIN imaginable. 
The INTRO to his route is a kiss, yes, a FORCEFUL kiss literally meant to PISS SOMEONE ELSE OFF. 

So when people get mad at Haruki literally and metaphorically breaking Yuu's repressed sexuality with his huge dick down his throat all I'm really hearing is that people were expecting Shoichi 2.0 
Like you knew what you were signing up for since the start, Haruki  had SO many tells that sex to him would come more naturally than ROMANCE, with the PAINSTAKINGLY slow development of their FRIENDSHIP. 
If you were disappointed because of that and expecting something sweeter like a confession, I'm sorry to say you were probably expecting to "fix him" and failed by the first sex scene. Haruki never saw Yuu's infatuation as actual love, but as sexual attraction.
And even if he did see the love behind it, he'd shove that shit down and be in denial about it and pretend its just sexual.

Like, Haruki presents an interesting, new, and fresh dynamic to a story that already has three lengthy routes about friends to lovers with different kinds of sweetness and love right off the gate. If it's not for you, then that's okay! There's no problem with that, but I sorely hope that his route remains what it is despite the backlash. Because that's what it is at its core, and I don't even DOUBT there will be an eventual romance, but that will only come AFTER the rauchiness, because if Haruki will break through Yuu's sexuality, Yuu will have to break through Haruki's heart. 

And again, that's not really FIXING him as much as it is bringing out MORE out of him beyond sex. THAT'S the real romantic value here. 

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Its. Fucking. Toxic. You are a horrible fucking person for not thinking so. He quite literally sexually coerced Yuuchi and the entire thing is out of character for YUUCHI. haruki is a fucking terrible person in this update and that was evil. Nothing more to it.

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Yuuichi acts different in literally every route. He is shaped by the route character he follows and there ISNT any problem in it being toxic, it's a story, it is meant to be entertaining and open to explore dynamics man. NO one is saying hey this is okay and healthy actually, no, it's exploring a relationship that starts because of a stolen kiss. It is NOT meant to start off healthy. The same way Sho's entire route has a branching path that explores sexual assault from your own partner. 
Also they're teenagers, they're not gonna act perfect either, theyre going to act rashly and against their better judgement, it MAKES sense so far to me! If you DON'T like this kind of story exploration it's not for you and THAT'S OKAY. But also calling real people HORRIBLE for understanding what this route is about is also crazy

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Stars above, thats the good stuff. I was thinking that I would be ready for anything in this after that day with Jun, but damn Haruki is bold.

And I find it funny that our MC just turn into a teenager girl mood whenever talking with Haruki, really cute, but this man has to daydream less wilhe walking.

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Im late but YEYYY A HARUKI UPDATE LETS GOOOO!!!


See you guys in the next 8 months for another haruki update

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English is not my first lenguage

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I read the criticism for this release and I don't think the scene was rushed. In fact, I think that the whole story lead you to a moment like this. Maybe i'm wrong, but I believe that Haruki uses his body and sexual appeal as a way to deal with his homosexual toughts in the worst way possible. He KNOWS Yuu is into him and to deal with those thoughts he uses his body to make fun of his feelings, in a "if I do this only to tease him i'm still straight, thats not gay". I thought the whole scene would lead to a kiss but in retrospective, that would not go with his character. 

Think about it, whats the most unpersonal thing he can give to Yuu, not his mouth or ass, neither having s3x with him outright, all those things would be too personal, too emotional. The scene leaves you with a "im only using you, I don't have feelings other than seeing you as less than me" and "its head so its not gay" logic. He is a very conflicted character that wasn't going to give us the "slow burn into kiss" type of romance. But, although I say that I believe all the scene was made according to the character I think two things have to be integrated into the story: (i) Haruki feeling actually sorry and regretting the way he made the first sexual interaction; (ii) Yuuichi giving himself enough respect to say when and how they have intercourse. Anyways, great release, a lot of bittersweet feelings with this one, let's hope the story develops in a way that can resolve this points and specially try to tackle the "im not gay bro im just making fun of you" and the "i actually i'm like a human being that can make decisions for himself".

Fuck it, I say let us top him in revenge idfc haha

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PEAK. Haruki for life.

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ERM o-okay what uhhh what not the pants a A-


My heart not ready of these

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peak idc

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Okayyy, so that was so surprising that is was so unexpected! Like who would've thought it go there with Yuu being like that with Haruki during that scene but hey i mean i get it but hmm lets see if anything changes off the route since the ideas of what's gonna happen later on is gonna fit well with the storyline. Overall Scene was a pretty good concept and had me kicking my feet lmao. BUT FEEL BETTER THO!!! WE WILL BE WAITING!!! <3

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Gonna ask. When will Haruki's Profile be implemented? I can't see his. All in all, this is my favorite slow-burn VN I have read.

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DELICIOUS

FINALLY SOME GOOD FUCKING FOOD

(I don't care about the haters, this is my favourite route so far and this update made it even better)

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I have to wonder about the patreon comments because this update was the best so far for me. I've watched people play the other character's routes and the writing is good but it was Haruki that made me buy the game for myself.  There may be spoilers in my comment. 

Considering what the other routes have happening them, especially Shoichi,  I feel like What Haruki did wasn't too much.

Remember that there was a long buildup to this. The past update had me squealing and blushing for how cute they looked next to each other. The emotions Yuu felt leading up to this, the drive to push through all the smack talk to get closer to Haru, going out of his way  to make time to see him, doing anything and everything to get to know him better....you can see the attraction. Especially in that moment at the end of last patch. Definite spoilers ahead. 




With Sho you can see how its a little awkward to Yuu being as they've known each other all their lives, it took getting used to and being overwhelmed from Sho's forwardness is very different from how Yuu pursues Haru. This route shows Yuu wanting it before having any confession. Growing more comfortable around him and realizing his feelings first before anything happened.  

The warmth and sweetness that built up to this, the patience that Yuu showed to learn how to interact with Haru up til now really payed off in this patch. 

I can't see Yuu doing a 180 and feeling uncomfortable after the fact cause he already felt thirsty for Haru before it happened. Its okay to want that control taken.  This route is a very healthy route compared to the drama and pain in the others, so I can see Sho having some beef if it comes to that.  I just hope that going forward haru is more touchy feely. I look forward to the drama with Sho and how they maneuver that bit. So unbelievably exited for next update! HaruXYuu is my OTP!

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There is nothing healthy about that. Seek fucking help.

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This is hilarious. From all the comments and the update page, I expected something terrible to happen. But, some character writing criticisms aside, this is just them figuring out what they want from each other.

 We know Yuu is already falling for him, and clearly Haruki is as well. The future bump in the road is them learning how to be open and sweet with each other. I'd say, from current looks, Haruki's future in this aspect looks promising. 

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